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No Divinity In Separateness

Femininity on the rise
Masculinity feels threatened
I’m not surprise
Humanity has always been partial
If it’s not this cause, it’s that cause
What are we fighting for
From one extreme to the next
Where is the equanimity
Humans hate themselves
Thus no acceptance
No equilibrium
No serenity
No divinity
No love
Not even for the sake of
Our sanity
This is insanity
Humanity at war with itself
Forever burning internally in eternity
Until we realized there’s no divinity in separateness

Author:

Meek purple flower Blessed by Sun and Rain shower Now has Star power

44 thoughts on “No Divinity In Separateness

  1. Felt the ending was a bit out of place, a little forced, maybe better no divinity in division, no survival through separation, no existence without persistence? Or maybe I’m just talking rubbish XD what do I know… Either way nice work

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      1. haha.. :- ) It’s actually a really good suggestion, but I felt it would change the effect for me personally. But, as for flow or rhythm it’ a really good suggestion πŸ™‚

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  2. I wonder how much depends on other circumstances in life. For most of my career I served under a woman (I might want to rephrase that !) and so I never really thought of feminism in the same way as some of my colleagues who did feel threatened. I think there is a risk that once we perceive ourselves as being threatened then it becomes difficult to embrace emotions such as love and caring and that is where divisions often begin. A well thought out piece πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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    1. Thanks for sharing David, “I think there is a risk that once we perceive ourselves as being threatened then it becomes difficult to embrace emotions such as love and caring and that is where divisions often begin” Very true.

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  3. As long as we keep labeling people, we make it a them and us thing. Treat everyone with respect and equality and things might sort our. Unfortunately, many still think they are or have to be superior to others rather than just different. Pity, we have so much to learn from each other. Everyone has a story worth telling. Allan

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      1. LOL I know what you mean πŸ™‚ I am just going to relax this weekend. Son has to work. I have Mass Saturday evening, then a potluck to attend. but other than that, just relaxing.

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